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hey everybody...umm..
okay, so this is my first entry,as you can see, and this is my first time posting a part of one of my stories, but not the first time posting a piece of my work...please tell me how it sounds...and please tell me the truth...i can handle it...i don't want to walk around thinking i'm a great writer when my writing sucks...lol
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"Hey chief-" Rickey's sandy brown head popped into ...