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    Hail! My Valentine

    HAIL! MY VALENTINE


    "You fool? Unknown to what it falls,
    The day today, when Love enthralls."

    And thus they apprised what
    is the day? And I with all heart:
    Began to use my breathe as flute,
    called the wind which was mute.

    "One task to me. Carry my words,
    You mute wind and flying birds!
    To the one who talks to thou,
    Teach her the way, to me to connect-How?"

    "You unknown resider- To you I hail,
    I assure the life as I tell:
    The wind,sun,moon and the stars,
    All my friends nor we have any bars.
    I promise thee, the sun would shine,
    with as calm bright, as moon's light fine."

    "And now I unfold the secret,
    To tunes and notes, is my fate.
    Acclaim! You would be adorned high,
    With my harmonious and sweet sigh."

    "My rhymes and notes into nothingness lass,
    like gold, silver precious will never pass.
    And thus my beautiful colored fly,
    Take thy care, yeah my butterfly."

    Thus I hail and wait for thy,
    They told me the fool, who lie
    in the lap of this alone nature,
    Yet our part is of high stature.

    Call! I call. come on you divine,
    They told me today.
    Come and be my Valentine.
    -Nitesh Rachit Sharma

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    It is the poem which I composed on 14th February for one who is still unknown to me.

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    romantic

    Quote Originally Posted by Nitesh Rachit View Post
    HAIL! MY VALENTINE


    "You fool? Unknown to what it falls,
    The day today, when Love enthralls."

    And thus they apprised what
    is the day? And I with all heart:
    Began to use my breathe as flute,
    called the wind which was mute.

    "One task to me. Carry my words,
    You mute wind and flying birds!
    To the one who talks to thou,
    Teach her the way, to me to connect-How?"

    "You unknown resider- To you I hail,
    I assure the life as I tell:
    The wind,sun,moon and the stars,
    All my friends nor we have any bars.
    I promise thee, the sun would shine,
    with as calm bright, as moon's light fine."

    "And now I unfold the secret,
    To tunes and notes, is my fate.
    Acclaim! You would be adorned high,
    With my harmonious and sweet sigh."

    "My rhymes and notes into nothingness lass,
    like gold, silver precious will never pass.
    And thus my beautiful colored fly,
    Take thy care, yeah my butterfly."

    Thus I hail and wait for thy,
    They told me the fool, who lie
    in the lap of this alone nature,
    Yet our part is of high stature.

    Call! I call. come on you divine,
    They told me today.
    Come and be my Valentine.
    -Nitesh Rachit Sharma
    So romantic

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    Maybe it's your last single VALENTINE~Beautiful and powerful poem,I believe her will appreciate if she reads it.

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