I had a chat with this literary agent. I paid him fifty dollars per hour for two hours. I wanted a feedback that would tell me if my work could be marketed. I basically wanted to hear his perspective as a literary (and a publisher's) agent.
I was shocked by what he told me. My works are too Asian, clean, and affected and won't sell or get published--his short conclusion. It seems even my violent and nightmarish poems are too peaceful. He advised me to Americanize my stuff and not be overtly concerned with grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. because there are American editors for those. Was he bull****ting when he said that? I thought he focused on my raw style, sense, and sensibility.
I thought hard and found his advice sound. One has to dance to a prevailing music. When he gets a stage, he can dance to his own tune. Since I am seriously into this, and I really want to learn and improve, I have decided to try that American style, sense, and sensibility, an experiment of sort in my part. I want to hoard poetry collections. I pick three male and three female poets:
Wallace Stevens
John Ashbery
Robert Lowell
Emily Dickinson
Elizabeth Bishop
Sylvia Plath
Do you think those are enough for my Americanization experiment? Thank you very much!