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    Petrarch's Mistress

    In iambic lines
    you describe me
    from head to toe,
    but your volta
    fails to reveal
    who I really am.

    Where's the dance
    of my fingertips,
    the sensuality
    of my berry lips,
    or the shy luring
    of my full hips?

    It seems I exist
    in your sonnets
    for the loneliness
    of solitary poets
    you slightly tease
    and taunt aslant.

    How will they know
    the olive of my skin,
    my shaking thighs,
    their concealed sin,
    the joy of my arms
    when I slowly spin?

    I don't see the smile
    of my face you hide
    in all your poems,
    so I shall now elope
    with this troubadour
    who sings my name.
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    I liked this poem.

    I specially liked the following lines:

    Quote Originally Posted by miyako73 View Post

    Where's the dance
    of my fingertips,


    It seems I exist
    in your sonnets
    for the loneliness
    of solitary poets


    How will they know
    the olive of my skin,
    my shaking thighs,
    their concealed sin,
    the joy of my arms
    when I slowly spin?

    I don't see the smile
    of my face you hide
    in all your poems,
    .
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    Think you, if Laura had been Petrarch's wife
    He would have written sonnets all his life?


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    A lovely poem, Miyako! A what a good idea to have given Laura a voice.

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